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Não posto nada a muito tempo, mas resolvi postar este roteiro teste muito legal escrito por Emilio Baraçal, pq sei q sempre há um desenhista aspirante procurando um bom script para ilustrar no intuito de fazer o queixo dos editores caírem. Divirtam-se e tenham sucesso!!!!

I haven't post anything for a long time, but I decided to post that great tryout script written by Emilio Baraçal, cuz I know that always there are an artist searching for a good script to draw, to do the editor's chins falls down!

ENGLISH VERSION RIGHT AFTER PORTUGUESE VERSION!

CAPITÃO MARVEL – ROTEIRO-TESTE
Por Emílio Baraçal

PÁGINA #01
QUADRO 01 – Cena geral de Fawcett City, a cidade natal do Capitão Marvel. É um dia ensolarado.

LEGENDA
Fawcett City.

LEGENDA
(Billy Batson)
Bom dia, sr. Jones!

QUADRO 02 – BILLY BATSON está conversando animadamente com um JORNALEIRO, que pendura revistas em sua banca. BILLY está carregando duas sacolas cheias de compras do supermercado.

SR. JONES
(o jornaleiro)
Olá Billy! Tudo bem?

BILLY BATSON
O senhor ainda tem algum exemplar da Detetive Comics deste mês?

SR. JONES
Creio que sim, meu rapaz. Só um segundinho…

QUADRO 03 – De repente, em uma esquina próxima da banca, um carro conversível vira à toda velocidade, assustando os pedestres. No conversível, três BANDIDOS. Enquanto o motorista está concentrado na rua à sua frente, os outros dois atiram na direção da rua em que estavam há pouco. BILLY naturalmente vira-se para ver o que ocorre, interrompendo o que dizia.

ONOMATOPÉIAS
BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM!

BILLY BATSON
Que bom! Eu já tava pensando que ia deixar minha coleção incomp…

QUADRO 04 – O SR. JONES está procurando a revista que BILLY quer no meio das prateleiras de sua banca.

SR. JONES
O que é isso? São tiros?

QUADRO 05 – O SR. JONES vira-se para ver o que acontece e entregar a revista na mão de BILLY, mas ele sumiu.

SR. JONES
Billy…?

PÁGINA #02

QUADRO 01 – BILLY corre o mais rápido que pode, atravessando uma rua e carregando as duas sacolas. Do outro lado da rua há a entrada de um beco.

BILLY BATSON
Essa revista tá de brincadeira, viu? Quando tenho a grana, não consigo comprar!

QUADRO 02 – BILLY entrando correndo no beco sujo. De canto há um MENDIGO dormindo.

QUADRO 03 – BILLY deixa as sacolas perto do MENDIGO, já fazendo uma caridade pois não poderá ficar com as compras.

QUADRO 04 – BILLY grita para o alto, confiante.

BILLY BATSON
Shazam!

PÁGINA #03

QUADRO 01 – É o grande quadro da página. CAPITÃO MARVEL alçando vôo, saindo do beco. Raios e trovões por todo o seu corpo, vindo do céu. Ao fundo, o MENDIGO tomando um susto com a barulheira e o show de luzes.

ONOMATOPÉIA
KATA-BOOOOM!

QUADRO 02 – Close no MENDIGO, que olha em volta pra ver o que aconteceu.

QUADRO 03 – Mesmo ângulo do quadro anterior, mas agora ele olha na direção de algo, espantado.

QUADRO 04 – O MENDIGO está analisando as sacolas, abrindo-as pra ver o que tem. Com uma das mãos, coça a cabeça, confuso.

PÁGINA #04

QUADRO 01 – Foco nos BANDIDOS em fuga em seu conversível. A polícia os persegue. Um deles fala com aquele que está dirigindo enquanto o restante continua atirando. Pessoas na rua se protegem com medo dos disparos.

ONOMATOPÉIAS
BLAM! BLAM!

BANDIDO 01
Cara, pisa fundo! Eles tão perto!

BANDIDO 02
(motorista)
Tô fazendo o que posso, mermão!

QUADRO 02 – Mostre o BANDIDO-MOTORISTA com expressão de surpresa.

QUADRO 03 – Barrando o caminho deles apenas alguns metros adiante está o CAPITÃO MARVEL em pose triunfante.

CAPITÃO MARVEL
Olá! Vida corrida, hein?

QUADRO 04 – O CAPITÃO MARVEL levanta uma das pernas como se fosse dar um pisão. Ele sorri despretensiosamente.

PÁGINA #05

QUADRO 01 – É o grande quadro da página, com o CAPITÃO MARVEL pisando fundo na dianteira do conversível, destruindo toda frente do carro e empinando-o, fazendo os dois BANDIDOS que estão atrás voarem por cima dele. O MOTORISTA está com uma descrente expressão. Trauseuntes assistem ao ocorrido, perplexos.

ONOMATOPÉIA
CRUUUUUNCH!

BANDIDO 01
Ahhhhhh!

BANDIDO 03
Santa mãe!

QUADRO 02 – Com a velocidade de Mercúrio o CAPITÃO MARVEL agarra os dois BANDIDOS que foram arremessados devido à inércia pelos seus respectivos cintos, antes que caiam no chão. Seus reflexos foram perfeitos.

CAPITÃO MARVEL
Não se preocupem…

QUADRO 03 – O CAPITÃO MARVEL continua segurando-os. Eles não acreditam no que aconteceu. A polícia está parando suas viaturas próximas ao carro dos bandidos.

CAPITÃO MARVEL
… não deixarem se machucarem, de modo que a única preocupação de vocês será repensarem suas vidas.

QUADRO 04 – POLICIAIS se aproximam rapidamente do CAPITÃO MARVEL com pistolas em punho. Ao fundo ou em um canto, um dos POLICIAIS está apontando a arma para o BANDIDO-MOTORISTA.

POLICIAL 01
Obrigado, Capitão!

PÁGINA #06

PÁGINA INTEIRA – CAPITÃO MARVEL inicia vôo, despedindo-se dos policiais enquanto levam os BANDIDOS presos.

CAPITÃO MARVEL
Não precisa agradecer, oficial! Estou sempre por aí!

FIM.

CAPTAIN MARVEL - TEST SCRIPT
By Emilio Baraçal

PAGE # 01

PANEL 01 - General Scene Fawcett City , the hometown of Captain Marvel . It's a sunny day.

LEGEND
Fawcett City .

LEGEND
( Billy Batson )
Good morning , sir . Jones !

PANEL 02 - Billy Batson is talking animatedly with a journeyman , magazines hanging in his stall . BILLY is carrying two bags full of the groceries .

SR . JONES
( journeyman )
Hello Billy ! Okay ?

Billy Batson
Do you still have a copy of this month's Detective Comics issue?

MR . JONES
I think so , my boy . Just a sec ...

PANEL 03 - Suddenly , on a nearby corner of banking, a convertible car turns at full speed , scaring pedestrians . The convertible three BANDITS . While the driver is concentrated in the street in front of the other two shoot toward the street where they were earlier. BILLY naturally turns to see what happens , interrupting what he was saying .

SFX
BLAM ! BLAM ! BLAM ! BLAM !

Billy Batson
That good! I was already thinking I would leave my incomp collection ...

PANEL 04 - MR. Jones is looking for the magazine BILLY either in the middle of the shelves of your bankroll .

SR . JONES
What's this ? Are shots ?

PANEL 05 - MR. JONES turns to see what happens and deliver the magazine in the hands of Billy , but he disappeared .

SR . JONES
Billy ... ?

PAGE # 02

PANEL 01 - BILLY runs as fast as he can across a street and carrying the two bags . Across the street there is the entrance of an alley .

Billy Batson
This magazine 're kidding , OK? When I have the money , can't buy it!

PANEL 02 - BILLY entering racing in dirty alley. Corner there is a beggar sleeping .

PANEL 03 - BILLY leave the bags near the beggar , already making a charity because you can not leave with purchases .

PANEL 04 - Billy yells up, confident.

Billy Batson
Shazam !

PAGE # 03

PANEL 01 - It's the big picture of the page . CAPTAIN MARVEL taking flight , leaving the alley. Lightning and thunder throughout your body , from heaven . In the background , the beggar taking a scare with the noise and the light show .

SFX
KATA - BOOOOM !

PANEL 02 - Close the beggar , looking around to see what happened .

PANEL 03 - Same angle of the previous frame , but now he looks toward something , amazed .

PANEL 04 - The beggar is analyzing the bags , opening them to see what they have . With one hand , scratching his head in confusion .

PAGE # 04

PANEL 01 - Focus on BANDITS fleeing in his convertible . The police pursued them . One of them speaks with one who is driving while the rest continues shooting . People on the street are protected afraid of shots .

SFX
BLAM ! BLAM !

BANDIT 01
Dude, step back ! They so close !

BANDIT 02
(driver )
'm Doing what I can , man!

PANEL 02 - Show - DRIVER BANDIT with surprised expression .

PANEL 03 - Barring their path just a few meters ahead is the CAPTAIN MARVEL triumphant pose.

CAPTAIN MARVEL
Hello ! Busy life , huh ?

PANEL 04 - THE CAPTAIN MARVEL lifts one leg as if to stomp . He smiles pretension.

PAGE # 05

PANEL 01 - It's the big picture of the page with the CAPTAIN MARVEL stepping back in front of the convertible , destroying the entire front of the car and rearing him, making the two thugs who are after flying over it . The DRIVER is with a disbelieving expression. Watch the pedestrians occurred , perplexed .

SFX
CRUUUUUNCH !

BANDIT 01
Ahhhhhh !

BANDIT 03
Holy mother of... !

PANEL 02 - With the speed of Mercury CAPTAIN MARVEL VILLAINS grabs the two that were thrown due to inaction by their belts before they hit the ground . His reflexes were perfect .

CAPTAIN MARVEL
Do not worry ...

PANEL 03 - THE CAPTAIN MARVEL still holding them . They do not believe what happened . Police are stopping their car near the Bandits vehicles .

CAPTAIN MARVEL
Leave ... do not hurt , so the only concern you will rethink their lives .

PANEL 04 - approaching POLICE CAPTAIN MARVEL quickly with pistols drawn . Incidental or in a corner , one of POLICE is pointing the gun at the BANDIT - DRIVER .

POLICE 01
Thank you , Captain !

PAGE # 06
FULL PAGE - CAPTAIN MARVEL starts flying , firing up the police while taking prisoners BANDITS .

CAPTAIN MARVEL
No thanks , officer ! I'm always there!

END.

Comics artists! Want a sample test superhero plot to draw? Try this:

Shared by David Campitti from Glass House Graphics Studios. Here's the link for it: https://www.facebook.com/david.campiti/posts/10201479811769443

WONDER WOMAN/SUPERGIRL/SUPERMAN SEQUENCE

DC SAMPLE PLOT

PAGE 1 --

* Establishing shot. Big panel. Late afternoon. WONDER WOMAN is on the sidewalk of a busy city street. She's hunkered down on one knee, next to a little girl about 5 years old. WW is signing a magazine that has herself on the cover. They are surrounded by teenage girls excited about meeting their hero. She's noticed by guys on the street, too. She's exactly as sweet and wonderful as you hoped she would be.

* Some of the girls look into the sky, pointing at a meteor hurtling down.

* Closeup on WW, looking up, wide-eyed, mouth open. "Oh, my!"

* Upshot: WW flies upward, to intercept it, leaving the girl happily holding her magazine. The PEN that WW was holding is broken on the ground.

PAGE 2 --

* KRASHH -- WW is smashed to the ground by the meteor, which is the size of a wrecking ball. It's glowing.

* She crawls out from under it, hair dishevelled. "Unghhhh" We see this happens near a warehouse building.

* Close-up on her eyes, glowing.

* SUPERGIRL flies down, to help her.

* Medium close-up on Supergirl and WW, as Supergirl reaches to help.

PAGE 3 --

* WHAMM! WW punches Supergirl with both hands locked.

* BA-THOOM! Supergirl is careens through the warehouse building wall.

* She grabs Supergirl, swinging her around by the cape....

* And hurls her through the roof of the warehouse and into the now-darkening sky. Rubble starts to fall down to join the rubble already on the floor from the smashed wall.

* SUPERMAN'S hand grabs WW's shoulder (our point of view) -- and WW whips her head around, to face him.

PAGE 4 --

* WHOKK! She slugs Superman with her right fist. It hurts him!

* Fists clenched, Superman staggers back, pissed off. WW holds her right hand as if it is aching from punching Superman. Her stance is legs wide apart, yet slightly vulnerable, reacting to Superman's fury.

* Close-up on WW's eyes, glowing.

* Suddenly: KRASSSHH! WW leaps out a warehouse window to escape, shattering it.

HAVE FUN!!! ENJOY IT!!! AND GOOD LUCK!!!